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Here are my top 5 comments:

1. I think this image looks really great! the colour scheme and snowflake detailing really make it feel and look like Christmas. The sleigh path running behind the information creates a subtle but effective flow to the image. I also really like the title font, it fits the theme perfectly and is eye catching for the viewer.

2. Firstly, I think that ‘How to build sand castle’ is a great idea for an infographic. Since It is mostly children who would use this sort of information I think that keeping it simple is a good idea. For design 1 i believe the main image of a sand castle is eye catching and appealing. The idea of having two boxes for the different things needed means its clear for the reader. I also agree that having arrows across the page would be busy and messy, perhaps colour coordinating it or just numbering it would be best. For design 2, the idea of having the title incorporated into the flag is a good idea, makes it more creative than a simple, straight title. With the instructions, tools needed and decorations, the image may look too busy, instead you could stick to the instructions and tools. Then have a sentence saying to find items on the beach for decoration. Design 3 seems like the most simple idea, the instructions all lead to the end product. I also agree that the boarder doesn’t quite fit the image. Perhaps there is a way to merge different aspects of all 3 designs.

3. I think your initial ideas are great! Pancakes or fruit salad would be simple but effective ideas, they would also be easy to illustrate using illustrator. How to raise chickens would be a really interesting image, although creating chickens may be a bit difficult.

4. I think the idea of a camera cheat sheet is a really great idea. I think the layout is clear and easy to understand. I assume you will have a sentence under each section describing what to do and how to do it. I cant wait to see the finished image.

5.Vita, I think your final image looks awesome. I think the colour scheme works great together and the layout is very effective. The arrows and images create a smooth flow around the page making it easy to understand. I also think that your use of font helps to connect the different aspects of the image and fits the mood that you have created for the image.